This is my first review, so hopefully it sounds ok. (It probably won't be very long)
Let me tell you, I really liked this story. I usually read longer things, so it seemed a little short. This is not to say that I didn't like it, though. I thought it was a perfect length for a nice read. The storyline was pretty good, in my opinion. The characters were very cool, I thought the guy was very interesting. The interactions between the characters were very sweet at times, and very moving, and really made you want to read more. I thought the way the eyes especially were done was very cool. It played a part in the story, too. Again, I liked the length, because I sometimes don't have a lot of extra time, so this was a satisfactory read. I had to share this story with my sister because I thought it was good ^_^ (Hopefully this review sounds ok)