I didn't dislike the premise of this story, but it lacked focus and direction. To be fair, it was a story about bored gods who lacked focus and direction....but, the impression that I got was that the author either lost interest in the story or did not have a clear plan on mind of how she wanted the story to progress and resolve. The first few chapters were interesting to me, but then it started to feel stagnant.

The characters were *beautifully* rendered, and one can only wish that the same attention to detail was given to the background illustrations. The only background throughout a good portion of the story is just a mass of flowers petals and a vague suggestion of Grecian ruins. Yes, most of the story takes place in a garden with a field of flowers, but according to story, this imaginary place is supposed to be beautiful, not indistinct and monotonous.