Story 6/10 - The premise itself is very interesting, though it's sort of a mess and goes all over the place.

Art 6/10 - Sometimes it looks good, sometimes it looks awkward and bad. You can definitely tell that Paru drew this, she has a very recognizable art style.

Character 7/10 - The characters don't change very much, but it's still interesting seeing how they react with the world, especially with Mako's bloody noses. The characters are pretty static and there's no real character development, but for such a short story I don't mind it.

Enjoyment 8/10 - I enjoyed it. Some of the awkward drawings are funny and made me laugh and I enjoyed this mess of a story. It's just fun and quick to read.

Overall score - 7