I will make this fairly short. You know the story already, cinderella has family issues, rich man finds her, tells her not to love him, theres money involved blah, blah blah... you can guess the ending . There were serious problems with the story line, that none of the other reviewers mentioned. The story started great, then it slowed down to the point of me skipping pages! and as if there was a problem the last 4 chapters sped in such a whirlwind to tie up all the ends and get all the characters to their respective places. The characters seemed to either develop slowly or remain stagnant, and of course the issues created were seemingly from a telenovela. In all honesty I felt that the manga could have been finished in 2 volumes and it still would have had the same ending and overall feel. I did enjoy the artwork especially the attention to detail and the building work. The only reson i stuck with this is because i was invested the first 10 chapters and i have to finish what I start otherwise this would have been on my dropped list.