Maga-Tsuki review

Jinjun11
Apr 04, 2021
So yeah a little review.
Some slight spoiler.

First of all, the setting; ok it was good taking japanese gods and thier story but seriously how can they have electricity in heaven?? How could the goddness not make money appear in front of them when they needed to make Akari's birthday?? This is the biggest plot hole yet. Author be like: "Manga logic ~" or "the readers wont mind". THIS DIDNT MAKE SENSE.

Now the plot; So yeah putting a childhood friend rival loli, her imouto and so on... Even tho its cliche and have many filler chapter, author think we wont mind if he add 'plot'. Whats more, he add new girl when he ran out of ideas. I mean why the fu*k adding Momo( or whatever she is called) in the 50th chapter when you plan to finished it 15 chap after??

Once again, TOO much filler chapter; "More chapter = more volume =more money". Yeah some author's mind...
His sister... Plz god re-name her "Plot armor". Author didnt even do the character development for her. How the fu*k she has that much influence on the principal, university or even the heaven?? Yeah 'Plot armor nee chan' is a better name.
Futhermore those goddness be like: I am 1000+ years old but im still young ~. I will fall in love with a 15 yo boy which is also a pervert♡"

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FFS MC PUSH A GIRL DAMN ALREADY, YOU WILL BE BOTH HAPPY!!!(Note:it is not consider as rape if both of them accept.They would marry anyway.) You have five f*cking girl beside you and still need porn magazine?????

No development with side characters either. Author just make his friends perverted like him, with one being rich and own an apartment. Idk why he dont need his parent permission to let them stay a night there. The other one just disappear like nothing without any one notice. How? Even the author dont know. Author, do readers appears stupid ,illiterate to you??

Well, the last 5 chap good and fun to read AT LEAST.
Only Akari development was good so far and this ending is barely satisfying.


Overall 6/10.
(Me being very very considerate)



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