Well...this story got me captivated first moment. It's full with heart-race moments, and there is enough action in it too. The story is quite unique, but sometimes it's plain and predictable, but I still like it very much.

About the art: yeah, well the character designs are good, but a little more detail can't hurt, can it? I mean...I am used to pretty shoujo manga, with details by every block, so i kinda miss the creativity with the shadings, and other stuff like that.

Characters are pretty good: my favorite is Inukashi, but I'm not fond of dogs. I'm not sure if he/she is a girl/boy. The long hair confuses me a little, so I thought I'd be able to tell by his/her clothes, but those were unisex, so I seriously can't tell xD

For me, Nezumi is a little harsh, but melt from laughing when that harshness turns into 'Eve', with the 'oh so cute' smile. I like the rats though ^^

Shion is really dumb in my eyes, and too naive. But I guess its like this with all yaoi/shounen ai manga or anime, that the main is like a typical shoujo charachter: dumb, naive, and of course don't forget that a little too honest sometimes ( 'I'm drawn to you' ), and the typical damn innocent look. But whatever, I got used to it, with all these dumber shoujo stories. But Shion is different: he actually CHANGED a little as time passed in this manga.

I enjoyed this manga alot, and I hope you will, or did too!